tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post112791492120604691..comments2023-06-20T06:37:00.019-04:00Comments on Enlighten Me: Haiku for September 28, 2005Sophiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13438462446034169553noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post-1127949712316804062005-09-28T19:21:00.000-04:002005-09-28T19:21:00.000-04:00Beard,Your haiku reminds me of my drive to work th...Beard,<BR/><BR/>Your haiku reminds me of my drive to work this morning. It was very foggy and the fog rolled quickly, like "streamers rising up".Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438462446034169553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post-1127949618062982912005-09-28T19:20:00.000-04:002005-09-28T19:20:00.000-04:00Gretchen,You're the fractal queen, too! I like yo...Gretchen,<BR/><BR/>You're the fractal queen, too! I like yours because I can meditate on them and look for images, just like your "Mickey" fractal.<BR/><BR/>I must warn you, though. The haiku flu is very catching and there is no antidote. You just might find yourself writing them, too!Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438462446034169553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post-1127949452993184582005-09-28T19:17:00.000-04:002005-09-28T19:17:00.000-04:00Aaron,What you just wrote is called a senryu. It'...Aaron,<BR/><BR/>What you just wrote is called a senryu. It's got the same form as a haiku, only it's not about a season. Actually, I've been calling some of my senryu "haiku". I guess it's just neo-haiku.<BR/><BR/>I like your attempt. It reminds me of when I double-check on my fingers the number of syllables I've used for my haiku.Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438462446034169553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post-1127949330874576542005-09-28T19:15:00.000-04:002005-09-28T19:15:00.000-04:00Thom,Thank you so much for your compliment. :)Thom,<BR/><BR/>Thank you so much for your compliment. :)Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13438462446034169553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post-1127928205420385032005-09-28T13:23:00.000-04:002005-09-28T13:23:00.000-04:00streamers rising updancing in the still warm sunbr...streamers rising up<BR/>dancing in the still warm sun<BR/>bright flashes of lightRed Barkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02271057885244539420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16239386.post-1127916584111601232005-09-28T10:09:00.000-04:002005-09-28T10:09:00.000-04:00Classic haiku -- 5,7,5, and you talk about a seaso...Classic haiku -- 5,7,5, and you talk about a season! :-] Here's my attempt:<BR/><BR/>counting his fingers--<BR/>the way that an amateur<BR/>follows the meterAaronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10736866978216119517noreply@blogger.com